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THSeeking Beta Readers for My Rewritten Middle Grade Fantasy
Hello everyone! I’ve recently rewritten my middle grade fantasy manuscript and I’m looking for thoughtful beta readers to help me polish it before I start querying. If you enjoy adventurous worlds, relatable characters, and a dash of magic, I’d love your feedback.
About the book (high-level)
Target audience: ages 9–12
Genre: Middle grade fantasy
Tone: hopeful, fast-paced, with moments of humor and heart
Premise: Joshua’s world is anything but ordinary. Between family, school, and the challenge of growing up, he discovers a magical journey that transports him to the ice plants, a realm under threat from a menacing Gonthragon!.
What I’m hoping for from beta readers
Big-picture feedback on: plot pacing, stakes, and character arcs
Consistency checks: world-building rules, magical system, and lore
Character feedback: voice, relatability, growth, and motivation
Readability: flow, chapter endings, and engagement hooks
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